[doc] Docs. Add links and rephrase the router GW IP description

Bug #1421544 reported by Denis Klepikov
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Fuel for OpenStack
Fix Released
High
Olena Logvinova
6.1.x
Fix Released
High
Fuel Documentation Team

Bug Description

http://docs.mirantis.com/openstack/fuel/fuel-6.0/reference-architecture.html#router

Your network must have an IP address set on a router in the Public Logical Networks.
Should be:
Your network must have an IP address in the Public Logical Networks set on a router port as a "External Gateway". Without this, your VMs a.....
...
If you add new router - do not forget set gateway IP for it from network you select.

Add Selection_106.png, Selection_107.png

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Your network must have an IP address set on a router in the Public Logical Networks. Without this, your VMs are unable to access the outside world.
In many of the examples provided in these documents, that IP is 12.0.0.1 in VLAN 101.

Network 12.0.0.1 in VLAN 101, mentioned here, placed also only on ONE picture, and we can not find it via search on page (Ctrl+F)
We need to add link to http://docs.mirantis.com/openstack/fuel/fuel-6.0/reference-architecture.html#configuring-the-network where network 12.0.0.1 shown.

Also I think we should add description of 12.0.0.1 into http://docs.mirantis.com/openstack/fuel/fuel-6.0/reference-architecture.html#configuring-the-network legend to simplify search.
Something like:

Public network: VLAN 101 (12.0.0.1/24)

Tags: docs
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Denis Klepikov (dklepikov) wrote :
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Denis Klepikov (dklepikov) wrote :
description: updated
Stanislav Makar (smakar)
Changed in fuel:
status: New → Triaged
assignee: nobody → Fuel Documentation Team (fuel-docs)
importance: Undecided → Medium
milestone: none → 6.1
no longer affects: fuel/6.0.x
Changed in fuel:
status: Triaged → New
summary: - Docs. Add links and rephrase the router GW IP description
+ [doc] Docs. Add links and rephrase the router GW IP description
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Igor Shishkin (teran) wrote :

Moving to 7.0 since 6.1 is already released.

Changed in fuel:
milestone: 6.1 → 7.0
Changed in fuel:
status: Triaged → Confirmed
assignee: Fuel Documentation Team (fuel-docs) → ologvinova (ologvinova)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to fuel-docs (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/214181

Changed in fuel:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to fuel-docs (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/214181
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/stackforge/fuel-docs/commit/?id=11aea3aa138b2c42cb991158f4a0c614705f4a06
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 11aea3aa138b2c42cb991158f4a0c614705f4a06
Author: Olena Logvinova <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Aug 18 16:12:16 2015 +0300

    [Ref Arch] Rephrase router gateway IP description

    This patch:
    - adds a description of router gateway IP while adding a new router;
    - adds pictures that show new router gateway selection;
    - adds a reference to the Configuring the network diagram;
    - adds the router network IP 12.0.0.1/24 as example to the diagram
      description.

    Change-Id: I867cb13b4049b9a27d551170f3152231c499f09c
    Closes-Bug: #1421544

Changed in fuel:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to fuel-docs (stable/6.1)

Fix proposed to branch: stable/6.1
Review: https://review.openstack.org/217065

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to fuel-docs (stable/6.1)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/217065
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/stackforge/fuel-docs/commit/?id=02436c6ba67de39f0a2e5f5693bd7d831dcbb791
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: stable/6.1

commit 02436c6ba67de39f0a2e5f5693bd7d831dcbb791
Author: Olena Logvinova <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Aug 18 16:12:16 2015 +0300

    [Ref Arch] Rephrase router gateway IP description

    This patch:
    - adds a description of router gateway IP while adding a new router;
    - adds pictures that show new router gateway selection;
    - adds a reference to the Configuring the network diagram;
    - adds the router network IP 12.0.0.1/24 as example to the diagram
      description.

    Change-Id: I867cb13b4049b9a27d551170f3152231c499f09c
    Closes-Bug: #1421544
    (cherry picked from commit 11aea3aa138b2c42cb991158f4a0c614705f4a06)

Changed in fuel:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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