Ubuntu Manual

Grammar improvement required

Bug #584492 reported by Mark Hepworth
6
This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
Fix Released
Low
Elan Kugelmass
Ubuntu Manual edition-2

Bug Description

788

Chp 6 p120

Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.

Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant.
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."

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Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass) wrote :

used suggestion

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass)
importance: Undecided → Low
milestone: none → edition-2
status: New → Fix Committed
Revision history for this message
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

To the first issue of '/home/ubuntu-manual'. I'm going to establish some placeholder formatting that will fix this soon.

To the second issue: I agree that the phrasing is a bit awkward. However, there is a difference between the file system and the structure.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Confirmed
importance: Low → Medium
assignee: Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass) → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
Revision history for this message
Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass) wrote :

<godbyk> I think my brain is fried.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: Kevin Godby (godbyk) → Elan Kugelmass (epkugelmass)
importance: Medium → Low
status: Confirmed → Fix Committed
Chris Woollard (cwoollard)
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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