Comma splice on p.35
Bug #585403 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
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Kevin Godby |
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Desktop background", p. 35 (PDF p. 37)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds, however, if you have your own pictures stored on your computer
you can use these as well.
Suggestion for rewrite involving following sentences:
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds. To change the background simply click the picture
you would like to use. You're not limited to this selection though. To use one of your own pictures, click the Add... button, and navigate to the image you want.
Related branches
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
milestone: | none → edition-2 |
status: | New → In Progress |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!